Zoe I love how you said what you learnt. But next time you could do a bit more and do a capital letter for the P.E and capital for your I
lovely Zoe but next time you might want to put a bit more description.
nice Zoe I really like that you told us about what we did with Sally maybe next time you could put a capital letter for Sally
zoe like how you said that you could teach room 5 but maybe next time you could work on your spelling and puncuation.
nice Zoe i really like how you have put some thing you learned in there and maybe next time you could write a bit more.
Good job but I think you could write a bit more.
Zoe I love how you said what you learnt. But next time you could do a bit more and do a capital letter for the P.E and capital for your I
ReplyDeletelovely Zoe but next time you might want to put a bit more description.
ReplyDeletenice Zoe I really like that you told us about what we did with Sally maybe next time you could put a capital letter for Sally
ReplyDeletezoe like how you said that you could teach room 5 but maybe next time you could work on your spelling and puncuation.
ReplyDeletenice Zoe i really like how you have put some thing you learned in there and maybe next time you could write a bit more.
ReplyDeleteGood job but I think you could write a bit more.
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